Prompt: Write a Parent Email

Drafts a clear, calm email to a parent or guardian about a specific concern, with one plain ask and no jargon a non-teacher wouldn't know.

Updated Sep 2026 PIS score 84
The prompt
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You are a class teacher writing home about a specific, factual concern, in a tone that is calm and collaborative rather than accusing.

Objective: Write an email to the parent or guardian of {{STUDENT FIRST NAME — e.g. Alex}} about {{CONCERN OR REASON FOR CONTACT — e.g. missed homework three weeks in a row}}.

Context: {{RELEVANT BACKGROUND — e.g. this is the first time it's been raised with home; the student is otherwise doing well in class}}. Relationship so far: {{PRIOR CONTACT — e.g. no previous contact with this parent this term}}.

Constraints:
- State the concern factually in the first paragraph, without a list of every other minor issue
- Include exactly one specific, concrete ask of the parent (e.g. one action, one meeting time, one thing to discuss with the student at home)
- Do not use school jargon, acronyms or behaviour-policy codes a parent outside the school wouldn't recognise
- Keep the whole email to no more than 180 words
- Do not state or imply a cause for the behaviour that wasn't given in the context above

Example: "Could we arrange a five-minute phone call this week?" is one concrete ask; "let me know your thoughts" is too vague to count.

Output format: Return a subject line, then the email body with a greeting and sign-off placeholder {{TEACHER NAME}}.

Before finishing, check the email contains exactly one ask, stays under 180 words, and uses no undefined jargon or acronyms.

Example

Input

STUDENT FIRST NAME — e.g. Alex: Priya
CONCERN OR REASON FOR CONTACT — e.g. missed homework three weeks in a row: missed homework three weeks in a row
RELEVANT BACKGROUND — e.g. this is the first time it's been raised with home; the student is otherwise doing well in class: this is the first time it's been raised with home; Priya is otherwise doing well and engaged in lessons
PRIOR CONTACT — e.g. no previous contact with this parent this term: no previous contact with this parent this term
TEACHER NAME: Ms Whitfield

Output

Subject: A quick note about Priya's homework

Dear Priya's parent or guardian,

I wanted to get in touch about Priya's homework — she hasn't handed in the set homework for the last three weeks. This is the first time I've raised anything with home this term, and I want to say clearly that Priya is doing well and engaged in lessons otherwise; this is only about the homework.

Could we arrange a five-minute phone call this week to talk through what might help her get back on track with it?
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Please let me know a time that would work for you, and I'll call at that time.

Best wishes,
Ms Whitfield

Why it works

  • Limiting the email to one factual concern and one concrete ask stops a routine note turning into a long list that feels like an ambush.
  • Banning school jargon and acronyms makes the email readable by a parent with no insight into internal school systems or behaviour codes.
  • The pre-finish check re-verifies the single ask and word limit, catching a second buried request before the email is sent.

Why the basic version fails

“Write an email to a parent about missed homework” easily turns into either a vague, apologetic note that asks for nothing specific, or a message that lists every small concern from the term alongside the main one, leaving the parent unsure what actually needs a response.

What this prompt fixes

Separating the factual concern from any request, and limiting the email to exactly one concrete ask, means the parent knows precisely what’s being raised and precisely what to do next. Banning jargon and undefined acronyms matters because behaviour-policy shorthand that’s second nature at school (like a specific code or a system name) means nothing to a parent reading it at home, and can make a routine note feel more formal or alarming than intended.

Tips per model

  • ChatGPT sometimes defaults to an apologetic tone on the teacher’s behalf; if that’s not appropriate for a factual note, say so directly in the concern field.
  • Claude tends to keep the tone even and non-accusatory by default, which suits a first contact home well.
  • If this is a repeat concern rather than the first, say so explicitly in the prior-contact field — it changes how firm the tone should reasonably be.